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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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(my first picture in almost a year! 
) I hope you still like it 
Next the shadows on the skin~ It looks messy and not really smooth~ Try to make it less blotchy next time~
Next the neck~ There's nothing really wrong with the neck except you should put a slightly curved line on there~
Next his eyebrows~ His eyebrows don't look the same~ One of them is thicker with some hair slightly curled making him look more evil while the other one is just normal and rather thin~ Try to make them the same next time~
Also his eyes are quite odd~ I would think you should try making his pupils look in the same direction so he doesn't look cross eyed~
Well that's all~ Hope you liked my critique~
Good things - well first,i like how you drew the jacket,And the face.
But most importantly,Hes hair and eyes are red
(I'm joking of course,its personal preference~)
Bad things - well first,He kind of looks like hes derping.
-Maybe try to make hes eyes to look at the same spot,even when looking high.
Also,the hair doesn't quite look like hair,
-maybe you should make all hes hair go one way,as the line art doesn't make it look that messy,
or make the line art go white in some part,its a trick i learned recently
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The line art looks okay,but maybe pressure would help make it better?
that it will end smoothly.
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That's it!
Hope its okay
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