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Yuuto Korosawa by Todesanbeterin Yuuto Korosawa by Todesanbeterin
My OC Yuuto Kurosawa ^^

I know it's not my best work. ^^; (my first picture in almost a year! :O) I hope you still like it :)
Hello,I'm here to give a very short critique about your work,hope its okay ;)

Good things - well first,i like how you drew the jacket,And the face.

But most importantly,Hes hair and eyes are red ;)
(I'm joking of course,its personal preference~)

Bad things - well first,He kind of looks like hes derping.

-Maybe try to make hes eyes to look at the same spot,even when looking high.

Also,the hair doesn't quite look like hair,

-maybe you should make all hes hair go one way,as the line art doesn't make it look that messy,
or make the line art go white in some part,its a trick i learned recently ;p


The line art looks okay,but maybe pressure would help make it better?

that it will end smoothly.


That's it!
Hope its okay ;)
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Heh~, I'm not really confident in writing a critique but here goes~ First of all the hair looks rather unnatural or should I say not really much like hair~ I would have to say that you should color in one direction so it doesn't look rather messy~ Also instead of outlining his hair black you should outline it in a more vibrant red so his hair stands out~
Next the shadows on the skin~ It looks messy and not really smooth~ Try to make it less blotchy next time~
Next the neck~ There's nothing really wrong with the neck except you should put a slightly curved line on there~
Next his eyebrows~ His eyebrows don't look the same~ One of them is thicker with some hair slightly curled making him look more evil while the other one is just normal and rather thin~ Try to make them the same next time~
Also his eyes are quite odd~ I would think you should try making his pupils look in the same direction so he doesn't look cross eyed~

Well that's all~ Hope you liked my critique~
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Submitted on
January 16, 2013
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